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Journey of the Mind by ~CadoAngelus:iconCadoAngelus:





The Journey of the Mind
By Cado Angelus

The life I knew is far behind me
My path is now uncertain, hidden in plain sight
And as I stumble onwards, never looking back
I am driven by one burning need,
A thirst I cannot quench, a need for the elusive
Joy that is Freedom

No one waits for me; I’m free to roam alone
Always searching for the place where I’ll be free
Free from the oppression and the violence,
The hatred and the greed, the suffering and pain
Perhaps it exists not on our planet, nor in our universe,
Perhaps it is but an idea, this Inner Sanctum of the Mind
©2005-2009 ~CadoAngelus
:iconcadoangelus:

Author's Comments

i came up with this one while i was considering all the problems in our world. I decided that it would be much more uplifting to think about leaving all of it behind and trying to find inner peace. This is what i came up with, enjoy.

I would like to dedicate this one to Gildedrose, who has given me feedback on both my first poem, and on this one while i was writing it. Cheers princess, and i hope one day that i can write as well as you

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:icontrizzles1:
Good job ^_^

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Welts of your scorn, my love, give me more
Send whips of opinion down my back, give me more

Me and ~evilzanna 's joint account: ~Trizania

*dibbi you'll :heart: his work :hug:
:iconcadoangelus:
thanks it really means a lot to me, especially since its only the third poem ive ever written without being forced to

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"Cold silence has a tendency to atrophy any sense of compassion between supposed lovers, between supposed brothers"

I am a member of ~burn-p0etry and ~Horse-Fan-Club
:iconbankrupttherapy:
3rd poem ever...wow. I like it a lot...I'm stuggling to find anything I dislike about it.

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I take my camera out to sea, the coast is always changing.
:iconcadoangelus:
thanks man, that means a lot to me

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"Cold silence has a tendency to atrophy any sense of compassion between supposed lovers, between supposed brothers"

I am a member of ~burn-p0etry and ~Horse-Fan-Club
:iconmrphoenix:
I like this piece. Christ! I'm glad it's not another poem about red states and blue states. And considering all the problems in our world, joy and freedom are two ultimate escapisms. Despite that they're taken for granted, always. The vanity, racism, the fascism. No one can identify, but can describe, elaborate. You've done it man. Great poem, keep up the good work.
-Aaron

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I have come here much too often,
My brother sleep, a relative coffin.
:iconcadoangelus:
thanks, that means a lot to me, most of the cretins at my school think my work is shit

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"Cold silence has a tendency to atrophy any sense of compassion between supposed lovers, between supposed brothers"

I am a member of ~burn-p0etry and ~Horse-Fan-Club
:iconmrphoenix:
it's because most children nowadays can't truly appreciate good poetry. All they read is EAP, they try and make shit overrated as fast as they can. so don't listen to them, if you like writing, keep doing it because it's something you're good at.
-Aaron

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I have come here much too often,
My brother sleep, a relative coffin.
:iconliquidgodess:
That was very nice, i like it~.

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God grant me the serenity to accept the things i cannot change, courage to change the things i can, and wisdom to know the difference.

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